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Post  Anonymous Girl Tue Apr 19, 2011 7:15 am

What did you think of my poem?

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Post  Danielle Tue Apr 19, 2011 3:30 pm

Your stanzas worked well together, and you stayed on the path of the title. I enjoyed your idea of a poem, and hope you will continue writing. Please, next time, you may put the poll in the feedback, and not at the poem itself.

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Post  Anonymous Girl Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:44 pm

Oops. I hade both pages open at one and put the poll on the wrong one. *tut tuts self*

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